One day during school Mrs. Taylor assigned us a project she said we have to make a egyptian game so cassandra and me did tomb doom. We built a pyramid and drew boxes around the poster board then we colored some boxes in and numbered some then we wrapped up some dolls. Then we wrote the rules. On game night it wasn’t a success because dad said Kelly couldn’t get in the tomb because there were two dice and you couldn’t role a one that made me feel bad. But mrs. Taylor said I did a good job
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Now Miss Claire, what I said was “you can improve Tomb Doom because we got stuck at the end.” The rule said you had to roll the exact number to get into the tomb, but the problem was if you landed on the last square before the tomb (as Kelly did) then it is impossible to roll a 1 with two dice! Kelly and I told you that if you put a “go back 2” on the last square, that would help.
When you make something, you should be glad that people give you feedback on how to make that something better. In fact, successful people are always asking “how could I do better?”
Otherewise, we had a lot of fun playing your game, and I think Tomb Doom may have been the best of all at game night. (And I told you that too!)
I want to play!